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Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
05-20-2012, 12:02 AM (This post was last modified: 05-20-2012 12:04 AM by KEQ-Commando.)
Post: #11
RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
Bump. Prologue added, minor changes made to Part 2. (Scenic description added, last line of first paragraph changed).

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05-20-2012, 09:24 AM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
I like the addition. I look forward to seeing the link between the prologue and the present part of the story.

Only one thing I could see; in one sentence, you say, "he had lived in for the last ."

I think you forgot to put the time amount he had lived there. But thats all I can really see!

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05-20-2012, 10:26 AM (This post was last modified: 05-20-2012 10:30 AM by KEQ-Commando.)
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
My bad, I need to sort that out!
Fixed

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05-21-2012, 09:19 AM (This post was last modified: 05-21-2012 09:20 AM by theschizogenious.)
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
lol someone used my mining moon causes planet changes idea XD

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05-23-2012, 01:53 PM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
(05-21-2012 09:19 AM)theschizogenious Wrote:  lol someone used my mining moon causes planet changes idea XD

He posted that before you updated your story to have the new chapter...

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05-23-2012, 02:40 PM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
-__- ^^ meh to u sirrah

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05-23-2012, 03:00 PM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
I don't think I'd finished it when you mentioned about moons, so I added a bit extra. It just meant instead of the church "ex-communicating" the planet (remember those viral methods to destroy a planet?) I figured it didn't matter enough to them.

I haven't got time at the moment to write. Busy busy busy, and MAG takes 2 hands. I'll keep updating when I have time. I might publish it one day. More practise though, always more practise.

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06-27-2012, 12:31 PM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
Well I finished my drawing. And promptly lost it. And now I am not so sure about my tablet purchase. I am so lax when it comes to graphix. I have like 3 people asking me for a sig and I don't even have GIMP installed! I need to get that done!

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06-27-2012, 12:44 PM (This post was last modified: 06-27-2012 12:50 PM by KEQ-Commando.)
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
Why would you tell us you want a gimp... That's just wrong. A troll I can help with. You do ya gimping alone.
I should probably add to this... but I start work earlier now, I have no free time... Poor me... I'll get around to putting how calif ends on the ground and what their objective is at sometime... (trouble is, the more I adapt it for EvE the less hardfi it becomes). LoL shields. (everyone knows shields are total Scifi bs and not sciFact, basically wherever you mount your shield within your ships hull, would become the new point of impact, and tear the shield gen off it's mountings... Then there's plasma, magnetic and radiation shields... All same problems... God damn Sci fi these days is drivel.) Anyone know if it's possible to get a copy of Man/Kazin wars still? Can't find it on iBooks... Hmm will keep searching...
Edit man/kzin vol1 on Amazon...

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03-04-2013, 03:21 PM
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RE: Fan fiction for Dust/Sci-Fi
I just got an idea of this doing a dust fiction today. Now it would be like tryen to copy someones idea.

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